Why do I have to put all out in a hurry,
Whiff, uncouth with rush comes out
thoughts that ages bury.
Pop like a flame it lights my mind.
Bang when it seeded I thought I divined.
Puff when I shoot it out my mouth,
Whiff, uncouth with rush comes out
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quiet whimsy!!!
ReplyDeletei feel it happens when we try to express 'I thought I divined' factor...i mean the idea of expressing divine experience,,,,,there this uncouth resides...this happens when we modify the flow of experienced divine just by adding a new wish to express thru mouth or any other means//........and it's not an easy task to express as IT is OR some part of IT..so.. agar shuroo me eq-do baar uncouth nikal raha hai ..chaltaa hai.....(par agar uncouth ki frequency n quantity jayada hai to...u know to whom to contact...arrey mano-chikitshaq....;-)..:-)
so in the early days one should be prepared to bear this uncouth
n who decides that ..this is couth or uncouth
kisi ne kaha hai....
vaani kitni vivash bandhee jo
rood arth ke kaaraa me
har nirnay a-sahay bah raha
chir-sanshay ki dhaara me
sachmuch hi patthar par jad hai
jeevan ke vishwaso ki
pankho ki naadaani
karte paribhasha aakasho(N) ki
my fav lines in this : Thoughts that ages bury